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　　56. Elizabeth Barber, the author of both Prehistoric Textiles, a comprehensive work on cloth in the early cultures of the Mediterranean, and also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on textiles in ancient societies.

　　(A) also of Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on

　　(B) also Women’s Work, a more general account of cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

　　(C) of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

　　(D) of Women’s Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

　　(E) Women’s Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

　　答案解析如下：

　　(A)also of Women's Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority on

　　【错误】 见(E)。

　　(B)also Women's Work, a more general account of cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

　　【错误】 见(E)。

　　(C)of Women's Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

　　【错误】 见(E)。

　　(D)of Women's Work, a more general account about early cloth manufacture, is an expert authority about

　　【错误】 见(E)。

　　(E)Women's Work, a more general account of early cloth manufacture, is an authority on

　　【正确】 正确使用了“both X and Y”结构，将“Prehistoric Textiles”和“Women's Work”平行在一起，且避免了“expert authority”和“and also”这样的语义重复，表述简洁。

　　【大意】 Elizabeth Barber，《Prehistoric Textiles》和《Women's Work》的作者，是古代社会纺织物专家。

　　【最优解题思路推荐】

　　“expert”和“authority”语义重复，“and”和“also”语义重复，因此只有(E)最简洁。

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