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5. Of all the vast tides of migration that have swept through history, maybe none is more concentrated as the wave that brought 12 million immigrants onto American shores in little more than three decades.
(A) maybe none is more concentrated as
(B) it may be that none is more concentrated as
(C) perhaps it is none that is more concentrated than
(D) maybe it is none that was more concentrated than
(E) perhaps none was more concentrated than
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(A)maybe none is more concentrated as
【错误】 比较结构:GMAT语法中,比较句式使用“more……than……”或“as……as……”而“more……as……”用作两个对象的比较属于句式杂糅。
(B)it may be that none is more concentrated as
【错误1】 比较结构:见(A)。
【错误2】 修饰成分:“Of all the vast tides of migration that have swept through history”是一个修饰语,其大意为“在所有大型迁徙潮之中……”,这一结构修饰“none”这一名词结构。GMAT语法中,名词的修饰语(即定语)与所修饰名词应尽量就近,因此本选项逊于(E)。
(C)perhaps it is none that is more concentrated than
【错误】 修饰成分:见(B)中【错误2】
(D)maybe it is none that was more concentrated than
【错误1】 修饰成分:见(B)中【错误2】。
动词时态:本选项使用了强调句结构“it is……that……”然而该结构与其连接的“was more concentrated”时态存在差异,这种是时态差异不存在合理解释。
【错误2】 简洁明了:主动句和陈述句的简洁性优于特殊句式,如倒装句、强调句、被动句等。
(E)perhaps none was more concentrated than
【正确】 “Of all the vast tides of migration that have swept through history”正确地修饰了“none”。
【大意】 在所有横扫历史的大迁徙中,没有一个比30年内1200万移民登陆美国更加密集的了,
【最优解题思路推荐】
比较结构中“more”和“as”共同连接比较对象,立即排除(A)和(B)。
定语要尽量保持就近修饰,避免跳跃修饰,排除(C)和(D)。
因此选择(E)。
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